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2dalimit
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0 posted 2008-05-11 06:57 PM



A Moment of Time /Melton

When my mother comes to visit
she brings her loving smile.
Never do we talk,
she stays just a little while.

It is always nice when she comes,
she visits in my mind.
She’s my comforting dream -
seized in a moment of time.

Each Mother’s day is special
like none other,
a day I like to
remember my mother.

© Copyright 2008 Melton Culberth - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2008-05-11 08:59 PM


I'm glad your mother still comes if only in your mind.  There are some people that are just too special to leave forever.  I had a nice Mother's Day today with my daughters and their families and remembering my darling son.  Love, Joyce
Claira
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2 posted 2008-05-12 09:29 AM


That's really nice Melton
Reminds me I'll have to call mine

Claire

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3 posted 2008-05-12 07:39 PM


Melton:  Enjoyed your poem and glad you hae such nice memories of your mother. My family was very kind to me yesterday and it was a really nice time together.

Betty Lou

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2dalimit
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4 posted 2008-05-12 08:06 PM


Joyce, Claire, and Betty Lou,
Thank you for reading,
Melton

midnightblues
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5 posted 2008-05-13 12:42 PM


Hi Melton,

I was very very touched, can feel your heart in this

Love,
MiCheLLe

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2dalimit
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6 posted 2008-05-13 03:35 PM


Thank you MiCheLLe.

Melton

BrokenWinged_Angel
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7 posted 2008-06-12 01:42 AM


It is a very sweet poem.  I do hope you visit with your mother more then on Mother's Day though!!

BWA~

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K-K
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8 posted 2008-06-13 10:35 AM


What a lovely tribute to her. It's nice to still be able to visit wether they are near or very far.
Joyce Johnson
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9 posted 2008-06-14 01:50 AM


Glad to see your nice poem was brought back.  Mothers deserve more than one day.  Love, Joyce
pegasus111
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10 posted 2008-06-27 09:04 AM


a touching piece Melton. well done my friend.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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