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midnightblues
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0 posted 2008-05-10 09:37 AM


The sky turned crimson
In my surreal dream
All the most painful of memories came upon me
Conflicting thoughts and agony
Flashbacks of the most frightening

Too much trauma
Too much fear
For the first time my prayers were not heeded
I realized then and there
That it was a lesson well learnt

The crimson sky revealed its majesty
In the aftermath of my hangover
Signifying my awakening
Turning teetotaller

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It is good to be back, I hope I'll write lots!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

© Copyright 2008 MiCheLLe - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2008-05-10 12:52 PM


A familiar name, a new shown face
My dear I'd know you any place.

It's good to have an old frind back.  And I hope you'll be back soon to share.  love, Joyce

midnightblues
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2 posted 2008-05-11 01:30 PM


Thanks Joyce
It is good to be back.

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

2dalimit
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3 posted 2008-05-11 05:51 PM


A good read- lots of passion. I had a crimson sky majestic revelation once that also turned me to teetotalism. I gave it up March 17, 1987.
Thanks, and good luck.
Melton

midnightblues
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4 posted 2008-05-13 12:44 PM


oh Melton,

Tis good to know that I'm not alone in this, thanks so much for sharing ^_^

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

kaile
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5 posted 2008-05-14 08:07 AM


that drastic? can't you have everything in good moderation? haha
midnightblues
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6 posted 2008-05-15 02:11 AM


kaile!
obviously I can't lol
tis good to see you again

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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