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N_i_C_o_L_E
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since 2008-05-01
Posts 11
North Carolina

0 posted 2008-05-06 02:36 PM


The rain will cease to bathe the ground
The thunder’s roars will fade away
Your heart will mend it’s broken self
The sun's warmth will brighten your days

Your kindness and your virtues
Have all been but ignored
While fire has burned with wicked flame
Your beauty has been adored

You’ve given strength
Through bloodshot eyes
You’ve eased our pain
Although you cry

But know that while our path
May not be easy to walk upon
It’s worth it for the memories
The one’s which we hold fond

The rain will cease to bathe the ground
The thunder’s roars will fade away
Your heart will mend it’s broken self
Your Son's warmth will brighten your days.

[This message has been edited by N_i_C_o_L_E (05-06-2008 03:52 PM).]

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
1 posted 2008-05-06 03:12 PM


There is sadness and gladness for we mothers who have lost sons or daughters.  I hope your mother can find joy in those she still has.  Love, Joyce
2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
2 posted 2008-05-07 06:52 AM


You're right. The sun's and Son's warmth will brighten your day. ....It’s worth it for the memories
The one’s which we hold fond....

Thanks, And welcome to PIP.
Melton

N_i_C_o_L_E
Junior Member
since 2008-05-01
Posts 11
North Carolina
3 posted 2008-05-07 10:44 AM


Thanks guys, I just started writing again.  It's been five years since my brother's passing and I'm just getting to a point where I can deal with it.  Thanks again, it really means alot.
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
4 posted 2008-05-10 08:35 AM


I felt deeply touched reading this..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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