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Pluto

0 posted 2008-04-17 03:44 PM


Sometimes dreaming
Fast asleep
If awoken
Pray to keep
Little bits
Here and there
Fill the shadows
Everywhere
Other times
Living breathing
Awakened mind
Though still seeming
Still dreaming at times
Conscious fading
Escaping real
Emulating
These words do feel….


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2008-04-19 04:15 PM


Accurate description of that fuzzy feeling upon awakening.  Joyce
Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-04-20 05:00 PM


"Conscious fading", yes that's good!

Love,
Margherita

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3 posted 2008-04-20 09:11 PM


Victor~
I enjoyed the word flow in this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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