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Inspired-8
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0 posted 2008-04-16 02:31 AM



As with the leaves
Blowing about
Feelings may deceive
By winds of doubt
Settle in corners
Dark hidden thoughts
Repressed by its owners
Till nostalgically sought
Surviving just as
Memories of past....


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r v wooo
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1 posted 2008-04-16 10:10 AM


inspired-8, was moved by your poem, "scattered". strange how words on flash cards stimulate a response. was always intrigued by scattergrams. it takes me back in time to the deciduous forest of my memory and standing there is one lone evergreen, the common thread, binding the future of the forest from teacher to student.

through the years, the little acorns of the mighty oak have spread and sprouted in all of the corners of the topo but the evergreen still stands alone, within the boundaries of truth and justice.

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