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Beasley
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0 posted 2008-03-30 09:28 AM



Raindrops drum a tirade dreary.
From their lecture, I am weary.
Golden sun, seek out the sky
And watch the puffy clouds go by.
Then dry the ground so soaked by rain
That beckons to the hues of stain
From blossoms born of tender sprouts
While bygone winter stalks and pouts
And leaves the season in defeat
With an icy heart no more to beat.

© Copyright 2008 Barbara Gedman - All Rights Reserved
r v wooo
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1 posted 2008-03-30 09:57 AM


the death of winter and the birth of spring...nature is such a beautiful thing and so is your poem.

[This message has been edited by r v wooo (03-31-2008 02:20 AM).]

Beasley
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2 posted 2008-03-30 10:39 AM


Thank you R V. What a nice thing to say!
Barb

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3 posted 2008-03-30 11:02 AM


Barb~
I do wish you Spring on the lawn to bloom the flowers~

Come on down to my warm corner of the world~
Ah, come on ... you know you want to~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Beasley
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4 posted 2008-03-30 01:55 PM


Marge,
Maybe some day that might happen! I am going to Georgia in May.
Love, Barb

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5 posted 2008-03-30 04:59 PM


So lovely.  

I can't wait to see the new Iris shoots - and I miss the days that my sisters and I would try to be the first to find the sping violets.  I always lost, but it did not matter when I would see those delicate little flowers.

Alison

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6 posted 2008-03-30 05:37 PM


Hi Barb:  I hope your spring is glorious when it fully arrives!

Love
Betty Lou

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7 posted 2008-03-30 07:11 PM


Barb~
quote:
I am going to Georgia in May.
GEORGIA ???
Dang ... a short drive on down to DeLand !!!
Come on~

When in May? Where in Georgia?
Bill has a sister that lives in Loganville, GA~

*Huglets*
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8 posted 2008-03-31 12:28 PM


It seems like spring is late everywhere.  Where is she hiding?  Great poem.  Joyce
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9 posted 2008-03-31 08:10 PM


I'm sure wishing spring would arrive. Lovely poem.
kitkat
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10 posted 2008-04-02 05:52 PM


This was wonderful and made me yearn for the Spring to arrive here in Nova Scotia..

Mother Nature has been teasing us lately. hopefully she is done with snow and will bring on showers for the May flowers

Kathy

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