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r v wooo
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               An Allusion of Elusion

      I've seen tomorrow
      a thousand years from today
      and, yet, it felt only like yesterday
      that the future, present and past
      were there for me to grasp.
      But, time, is such a delicate dimension
      and has moved beyond my comprehension,
      into a realm of infinite infinity,
      where matter and energy
      or neither created nor destroyed
      but, merely, change forms!
      So it be! for you and me,
      this suttle predicament of life and death,
      resolved, as an allusion of elusion.
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1 posted 10-15-2007 03:02 PM       View Profile for moondogz   Email moondogz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moondogz

Oh yes brother wooo, time is but an illusion. Well put once again.
              moon.
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2 posted 10-15-2007 04:44 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

The older I get, the more time eludes and I hope it is only an illusion. Joyce
r v wooo
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3 posted 10-16-2007 12:08 PM       View Profile for r v wooo   Email r v wooo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for r v wooo

yes...me too, joyce. i sense the eluding feeling...but i believe it is reality!

[This message has been edited by r v wooo (10-17-2007 12:30 PM).]

r v wooo
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4 posted 10-17-2007 12:20 PM       View Profile for r v wooo   Email r v wooo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for r v wooo

which is it moon? is time an illusion of reality or is reality an illusion of time?
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Well done, I really enjoyed the structure, flow and timing. The language was beautiful, infinite infinity stood out as a stark reality we are ignorant to at times but you capture here.
r v wooo
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6 posted 10-04-2012 11:21 AM       View Profile for r v wooo   Email r v wooo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for r v wooo

byski, hmmm...we must talk more later...must leave to process some wood for the hard winter...you have my interest in your poetry.
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Excellent way of pondering the mysteries of being.

Margherita
r v wooo
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Thanks, Margherita, for stopping by and sharing...always enjoy your comments.
Lady Goodman
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9 posted 10-15-2012 04:24 PM       View Profile for Lady Goodman   Email Lady Goodman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Goodman

Thinking about time makes me feel so old.

(I'm grateful for the invention of the digital clock--all that tick tock tick tock was maddening.)

Much enjoyed the thoughtful prompt here.

r v wooo
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10 posted 10-18-2012 11:51 AM       View Profile for r v wooo   Email r v wooo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for r v wooo

Yes, Lady G...time and the clock, growing old and becoming annoyed by the tick and the tock... may have led one to utilize digital technology to relieve such aggrevation.

By the same token, some seek relief from the thought of dying and have found escape through a spiritual resolve...while others, consciously or subconsciously have found resolve in propagating and a belief that the offspring is a extention of themselves.

When I ponder the thought..." matter is neither created or destroyed...but...only changes forms...", it causes me to wonder.
In the matter of life and death, are those aspects discussed, only, allusions of elusions?

Hmmm...
 
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