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r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07
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0 posted 2007-10-08 10:44 AM


                Queen of the Nite

             Did this jaded princess
        have the freedom of will to choose
                     or
      was she delivered to this place, by fate,
      where some will win and some will lose?

               Life is not a gamble,
           nor is it a nitemarish dream,
      for not all are afforded the experience,
                    endowed,
            to the pleasure Queen!

[This message has been edited by r v wooo (10-09-2007 09:09 AM).]

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moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
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1 posted 2007-10-11 12:45 PM


Hey wooo, for some reason I had a vision of a Queen Bee with a 40 ouncer of Royal Jelly being feted by an army of humble but industrious workers...very interesting poem. Short but as sweet as Tupelo Honey.

             moon.

r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07
Posts 656

2 posted 2007-10-12 09:40 AM


again, you have saved me, moon. to exit as a zero is more heart breaking than to live as one! you have resurrected me once more. in days of old, mankind, for a period of time accepted a belief in the "devine right of kings". history tells us," human belief systems change"...in the insect world, of the bee colony, the queen is endowed with a great responsibility. if bees had human traits and desires, such as, individual freedom and social democracy, what would become of the "tupalo honey"?  i believe, my "tupalo honey", the queen of the nite, like the insect queen, does not experience free will! therefore, what is the reality for the faithful believers if there is no sin and the only life we have is the one we experience here on earth, controlled by natural law, endowed, in our chromatic threads?
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