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moondogz
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0 posted 2007-08-11 11:39 AM



Ode to Rusty (1980 Volvo G.T.)

My rockers were rusty,
my locks were worn.

Better stay on the sidewalk,
'cause I ain't got no horn.

I shake and I rattle,
when I try to roll.

The wind and the weather,
have taken their toll.

The end is near,
but I have no fear.

Maybe I'll be recycled,
into a can of beer.

So the next time your enjoying,
a can of OV (old Volvo).

Have one for the road,
and remember me.

© Copyright 2007 Paul R Breen - All Rights Reserved
r v wooo
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1 posted 2007-08-11 11:57 AM


very, very unique poem...i like it!
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2 posted 2007-08-11 12:32 PM


I am sure you will have a better recycling than a can of beer.  How about a feather pen and a bottle of disappearing ink?   Joyce
moondogz
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3 posted 2007-08-11 01:36 PM


r v wooo, thanks for the input.


Joyce, I'm not sure what you mean by
that...maybe you could explain...thanks.

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