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Neo Junior Member
since 2007-08-08
Posts 13 |
The righteous never dies, immortal they are no matter of this life, the next shall be ours! The true poets see through your collective ways, for when you're gone in time, nothing it shall weigh! Never they are to die who bleed upon the cross, for redemption is near, and the dead shall rise! |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
three words seem to hold in my mind as i read your poem...rightous, immortal and matter...in my youth i was conditioned in the ways of the Trinity... as an old man, i have had time to think! i believe all dies...even the rightous and yet we are all immortal according to a basic principle for science...matter and energy or neither created or destroyed, they only change forms. i believe we are recycled back into a natural course of events and that we become bit and pieces of other living things. enjoyed your stimulating poem. |
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jossal Junior Member
since 2007-09-15
Posts 23 |
Lovely language, ideas ad poem! 10/10 Darkness is only the lack of light... |
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