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Twilight Skies (A Terzanelle)

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Gentle Spirit
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Twilight Skies

I walk beneath the twilight skies
filled with hues of blue and red.
I hear nature sing her cries.

This night the ground will be my bed
as I dream underneath a moonlit sky
filled with hues of blue and red.

I sit there dazed in a natural high
and I take in her grande majestic view
as I dream underneath a moonlit sky.

My thoughts once again drift off to you
nature has taken me under her spell
and I take in her grande majestic view.

Oh what stories mother nature does tell
I listen to her whisper in the breeze,
Nature has taken me under her spell.

All is calm, peace prevails with ease
I walk beneath the twilight skies.
I listen to her whisper in the breeze,
I hear nature sing her cries.


No more hangin' on to the past
No more filling up my tomorrows
With yesterday's sorrows
No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt}

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aziza
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1 posted 07-08-2007 03:12 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

Have I told you that you are such a beautiful writer?

You are.

A
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 07-08-2007 09:31 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Alison, sometimes I swear you make me wanna cry.  Thank you so much dear heart for your kindness.  Hugs to you.
midnightblues
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3 posted 07-08-2007 09:36 AM       View Profile for midnightblues   Email midnightblues   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit midnightblues's Home Page   View IP for midnightblues

Very very surreal, I absolutely adore this..

Love,
MiCheLLe

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4 posted 07-08-2007 09:41 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Took me 50 years to learn to SPELL terxanelle and here you are writing perfect ones...just ain't fair!

Beautiful work, gentle one....
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 07-08-2007 09:48 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Michelle, thank you so very much for that.  

ah Dear Deer, I can't say this is perfect because I am not sure it is even correct but it was one of my first attempts at it.
Thank God it doesn't call for da-dumming because we both know me and my accent here can't da-dum properly. Thanks for peekin in sweetie.  
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6 posted 07-14-2007 09:52 AM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

You have taken this form and made it your own. Beautiful.  Joyce
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7 posted 05-22-2011 02:06 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Enjoyed...   *~Coco~*
jwesley
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8 posted 01-24-2012 06:00 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

No idea what all that 'tecno-bable' is my friend, but I do know when I like something and the words are wonderful to me...

much enjoyed...

j.
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9 posted 02-27-2012 01:17 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I miss you, girly.

xoxox
Alison
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10 posted 02-28-2012 07:15 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

A really outstanding write!

Betty Lou (Trillium)

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11 posted 03-25-2012 03:36 PM       View Profile for Abbeon   Email Abbeon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Abbeon

Makes me home sick... To dream under dusk, Ahh now i long more then ever for spring.

Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul.

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12 posted 04-05-2012 07:37 PM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

I just knew you too were a lover of nature.Very nice.Thank you. jo perry
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Jo has been pulling up some really good pieces...

why didn't you share this with mom?





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14 posted 08-10-2012 01:22 AM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

I really enjoyed this!!
r v wooo
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15 posted 08-12-2012 10:34 AM       View Profile for r v wooo   Email r v wooo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for r v wooo

Humm...a poem from the past and I learned something about poetic form...Thanx!
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16 posted 08-26-2012 03:43 AM       View Profile for Idaho Pen   Email Idaho Pen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Idaho Pen

what a beautiful picture you paint with your words...takes me home.
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17 posted 09-01-2012 08:29 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is awesome! Very beautiful expression!
jwesley
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18 posted 05-26-2013 10:45 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Seems I commented on this waaaaay back in 2012 and after all this time, STILL don't know what
a terxanelle gobbly-goop is, but still know a beautiful write when I see it.

P.S. --- and I don't want to know at this point.  It would probably just make my head hurt!!

miss ya...

jimmy
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19 posted 05-26-2013 08:15 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Really lovely poem and I enjoyed it so much.
Betty Lou
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