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Jenna
Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180


0 posted 2007-04-06 02:32 PM


I'm trapped in a web
loook how fast its been spun,
before my very eyes i'm tangled.

The emotions that have been spinning around have caught me off guard,
theres no way they are setting me free.

Its twisting me up
drawing me in
holding on fast

I need to escape
its suffocating me whole.
Taking away my heart and replacing it with stone,
removing my soul and leaving me hollow,
slowly taking away the person I used to be.

No-one can see it
Its visible only to me.
I can only look back at my past,
remembering how things used to be,
as this web of deceit slowly takes my future, my heart and my soul.

© Copyright 2007 Jenna - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2007-04-07 09:23 AM


Very intense.. I'm feeling it now..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

rrrstop
Junior Member
since 2007-04-21
Posts 27
Florida
2 posted 2007-04-21 02:11 PM


Keep writing, keep posting poetry. It'll help.
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