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midnightblues
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0 posted 2007-03-29 01:52 PM


Your vision was a bubble
I believed in it
Caught up in the web of illusion

The vapor cleared and I awakened
Tomorrow now seems out of reach
Getting through today will be a test

Please tell me that there is no more love, no more hope, no future
Because you have to make me move on

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disconnected..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2007-03-29 06:31 PM


Hi MiCheLLe:  Enjoyed your poem. Motivation is hard to find sometimes!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2007-03-29 10:00 PM


A sad little piece Michelle but I like your new picture.  Love, Joyce
midnightblues
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3 posted 2007-03-30 11:15 AM


Hi Betty,

Thank you for commenting! It isn't easy to pick myself up when my relationship is on the rocks..

Dear Joyce,

Thanks dear, I like this new pic too

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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