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jjote
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0 posted 2007-03-26 12:40 PM



  

From the clouds the heavens open.
Karah, Warrior of light descends
in searing white splendor, a heat haze
shimmering in the sunlight.

She points at the sky, and a sword appears
like a silver bolt of lightning,
she controls its slashing with her mind,
as she breathes ice and fire into her enemies.

The gods have favored her
with a heart so strong, it beats
like the sound of thunder within the earth
sending its power into her fingertips.

It’s time for earthlings to celebrate,
In her presence, winter will depart,
and spring rush in like an eager child.
The Warrior has brought them Light.

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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2007-03-29 06:41 PM


jjote:  I enjoyed your poem and I think your warrior is now arriving in our part of the world!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2007-03-29 09:58 PM


A lovely imaginative piece.Joyce
midnightblues
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3 posted 2007-03-30 11:12 AM


I enjoyed reading this

Love,
MiCheLLe

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pegasus111
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4 posted 2007-04-02 06:52 AM


lovely fantasy piece. I see someone else enjoys the venue.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



jjote
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5 posted 2007-04-08 10:59 PM


Thanks for reading, guys.  I didn't think at first this was a proper forum for a fantasy write.
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