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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
The wood has grayed many years of weather, fighting Winter, July boils, and the rain" Comfort on the old back-steps twisted some, but sturdy. Dark clouds move across lighter shades, or is it the world moving around charcoal splashes. Rain..doesn`t it seem searing at times. I fought the day to bring me here, the cold minutes spent alone... no one to watch the rain"...Vincent |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Descriptive and wistful. Joyce |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
"or is it the world moving around charcoal splashes." hmmm...I like the image this brings. Hey, I love to watch the rains too.*smile* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks for sharing your minutes, Vincent! Well done! |
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JohnnyWood New Member
since 2007-03-26
Posts 8 |
"Rain..doesn`t it seem searing at times" That it does. Beautifully in tune to the most subtle moment; I love your style. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Short, sweet, poignant.. My favourite combination  Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Vincent: You certainly set the scene and the atmosphere well with this one. Very enjoyable to read. Trillium Betty Lou Hebert |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
I wouldn't mind sitting on those twisted back steps for a little while. Wonderful description. Debo |
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