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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2007-02-05 04:39 PM



Growing Pains

Listen to me, Darling;
let a smile replace that frown.
I will lengthen all your shirt sleeves,
I will let your pant legs down.

You complain you feel so awkward
and you don't know what to do
with arms that are all elbows
and are sprouting out from you.

I have something here to show you
in my winter garden room.
Have you ever seen such beauty
as this amaryllis bloom?

It was nothing much to look at
just a month or so ago,
until I gave it light and water
and it started in to grow.

I could see it add the inches
every day before my eyes
and it gave no indication
of its wonderful surprise.

If I hadn't known the end result
I might have thrown it out
in those weeks when it was only
a fast growng, lengthy sprout.

You are going through a growth spurt
that will only last a while.
The charming woman you're unveiling
will bring back your lovely smile.

Just know that as you're changing
and evolving hour by hour
you are growing into beauty
like my amaryllis flower.

By: Joyce Joyhnson 2/5/07

© Copyright 2007 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Vincent
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1 posted 2007-02-05 07:19 PM


takes me back many years, and my daughters, wonderful write. Vincent
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2 posted 2007-02-06 06:37 PM


Joyce this is a very interesting write.  You had my attention throughout the entire poem.  It was charming.  Thank you.

    Hugs Kimberly


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3 posted 2007-02-06 10:33 PM


Thanks Kimberly.  Looks like you've been reading our posts.  Thank you.  Joyce
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4 posted 2007-02-07 06:34 PM


Dear Joyce:  Oh my, does this bring back memories!  My daughter at 13!  Made me smile and enjoyed your poem very much.

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2007-02-15 09:23 AM


Joyce~

The beauty is in the blooming~

From bud to flower ... from little girl to woman~

Lovely penning my friend~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2007-02-16 02:16 PM


Joyce,
This is marvelous; it's a wonderful poem!  It takes me back to those years and the comparson is absolutely great!
love, Barb

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7 posted 2007-02-16 10:06 PM


Thanks everyone for your lovely comments.  Love, Joyce
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8 posted 2007-02-18 06:35 AM


Dear dear Joyce,

Your love flows through this piece..
I feel so much comforted of my growing pains. Though that must have been a long time ago it feels very much like it happened yesterday

Love,
MiCheLLe

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9 posted 2009-06-14 03:56 PM


Joyce

This is such a loving, beautiful poem.  I think that anyone with a teenager would want to share it.

Love,
Alison

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10 posted 2009-06-14 08:07 PM


Very nice. You captured it perfectly

Yoin

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11 posted 2009-06-14 10:04 PM


Awww!  I like this so much, Joyce, to see perfection unfolding it's blossom.  So much focus is put on outward appearance these days, but each tender petal is  there inside, and when it unfolds, so much more than the eye is dazzled...the heart is dazzled as well.

And the amaryllis is a stunning example of blossoming in the care sustenance and light.  

Karen

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12 posted 2009-06-15 06:58 PM


Thank you Alison for finding this worthy enough for another go around and to Yoin and Karen for their nice comments.  I was surprised to find it here.  Love, Joyce
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