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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
The night is dark, and I see no way forward, two mountains over from the Great Stone Faces I sit before the fire,gallant in it`s effort to destroy the night I think of Us, and can not reminisce. It is colder than I imagined, and wilder than thought, the trees seem silent not wanting to disturb me. I think, if you never are, why will you always be. Most measure in days and years, I am pleased with Spring flowers, and Winter`s breath, another season ends. If you are thousands of miles above, maybe drop that mental letter to the sea of trees below. I should have found a way to go forward, but its the thought. It might sound child-like but let me believe some have carved hearts, names or initials, and found someone when the need so great. Pick a heart when all hope is spent a little miracle to save it. In this letter is good will, set as the sail on a small wooden ship bound for a mile, or a far off sea. Two mountains over from the Great Stone Faces Winter diamonds grace a path. I have knelt beside crystal edges, dark pools, where the waters begin. Rest my hands as the river whispers, believe" that kind word is sent on it`s way...Vincent Black Hills, So Dakota |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vincent~ There is beautiful ink in your pen~ 'I think, if you never are, why will you always be.' *sigh* .... and this intrigues me so very much~ WONDERFUL~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
umm nice musings. Questions with no answers. East or west of the mountains? The Dakotas where I was born and raised or Washington state where I am now. South Dakota, one state down from my native North Dakota. We're so glad you're in our corner. Love, Joyce |
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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
thank you Marge" your to kind. Sometimes We know the answer, but still" ask the question.thanks again for reading me, and commenting. Vincent Joyce" west side, around Deadwood, Spearfish. spent a week going back looking for something" I`m not in the Dakotas right now. thank you so much for commenting, and taking the time to read me. Vincent |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Oh this just left me Lost on a wooded mountain top Debo |
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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
thank you Debo for your kind thought..V |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Vincent: A veryintriguing poem and i really enjoyed it. Nice work! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow  Beautiful one.. Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
lovely images here.. my favorite: Winter diamonds grace a path. I have knelt beside crystal edges, dark pools, where the waters begin. |
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