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Juju
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0 posted 2007-01-15 09:55 PM



Memories of The Wind

When I was little, I was told life was a tree.
And we were its many leaves…

While seasons passed, the wind's will became
An ever-changing grace

Even on still days, the wind is always there
Hence I was told, “don’t let your senses deceive its presence”

Oh, the fickleness of the wind can feel inconsistent
Testing one's virtues to their limit

Sometimes to the point, where one would readily call a storm
Then feel nothing at all

See the vid  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G10RDj8OHdA


-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

[This message has been edited by Juju (01-16-2007 10:08 PM).]

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1 posted 2007-01-15 10:04 PM


Juju:  Interesting poem!  I like the title too!

Betty Lou

midnightblues
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2 posted 2007-01-16 10:30 AM


Hi Juju,

I really like this too, tis wise and enlightening

Love,
MiCheLLe

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Juju
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3 posted 2007-01-17 12:14 PM


Thank you both.  I am glad you enjoyed my poem

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

trutodaraiders
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4 posted 2007-01-18 08:46 PM


I havent seen the video yet but i 2 like the poem nice job..~Bill
Juju
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5 posted 2007-01-18 09:42 PM


Thank you,

I am actually thinking about redoing that clip, because unfotunitly my camera needed adjusting.):

But thank you

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