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mrmojorisin5908
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since 2004-05-03
Posts 103
Colorado

0 posted 2006-12-28 12:55 PM




Volcanic ash, sloshing among the blue adorned sea
Charismatic echoing; Stark, naked among animals
Feel the vulgarity of humane antedotes
An uncommon ferocity, an atom relinquishes a disguise

I see heaven as a principality
Nonetheless,existentialism brings sacred symbolism
And twilight haunts an unforgiving SOUL!!!!
but feel, and regain consciousness to coincide

A big bone brings hitchhikers from the dead
"Starve on my dying bones of cynical meat!"
The dead surely died in living democracy
Blasphemy of living aristocrats, the poor!

SURVIVE says the sailor of the past
Regain an attempt at fame
One gets, one gains, fear from past premonitions
and the particle gains... FROM EARTHLY REMAINS!!!

Andrew A.
"While public funds evaporate in feasts of fraternity, a bell of rosy fire rings in the clouds."

© Copyright 2006 Andrew A. - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2007-01-02 09:41 AM


Hello Andrew,

This is deep, I like the powerful expressions that you conveyed.

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
2 posted 2007-01-02 09:41 AM


Hello Andrew,

This is deep, I like the powerful expressions that you conveyed.

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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