navwin » Main Forums » Corner Pub #3 » Put to the test
Corner Pub #3
Post A Reply Post New Topic Put to the test Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Xeonox
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2006-11-08 10:18 AM



So often it seems that life passes by,
In my heart, I feel as I died a while back,
Can’t seem to see past the blackness,
Promise me this world won’t leave me behind,
But most of the time, I just want to feel good,
And feel the love that we can share,

Too often it seems my mind is going weary,
Inside, this child is feeling secluded,
Stranger among his peers and an unknown to his family,
But I feel no remorse as I hang on each day,
Hoping that tomorrow will be better than today,

Please forgive if I ever took a wrong step in life,
Sometimes it is hard to be heard on this planet,
I must speak out through my words,
What I am afraid to speak through my lips,
As if this poison from my lips will slip away,
I often sit there and wonder why I don’t cry,

Then it hits me like a ton of brick,
The lord up there is testing me for the future,
That’s one way he can make me his messenger,
Take away the pain of others, as he tries me each day,
So that one day I can all wipe others tears away.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2006 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Juju
Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2006-11-10 11:28 PM


I liked this.  sometimes it is hard to give it up

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Main Forums » Corner Pub #3 » Put to the test

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary