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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2006-09-04 10:00 PM


Lovely Black

Have you ever looked
In the Sky,
Late at Night,
And fathom the elegant
Of the dark...
Dark black purplish cloud,
I adore the mystery black.

Want to taste,
Take a slip
Of seemingly dark coffee
That seemed so irresistible
Add some white,
And some sugar,
The seemingly dark
Tinged with olive brown.

Sunny day, I dress black.
How lovely the black match with my
Shinny dark long hair.
At high-school prom, I adored
My full black gown on dance floor.
At college grad, I wear black again-
Black seems to be my color...

I hear people say
Solemn black,
But to me, black is deep.
Oh maybe black has its own history of secretiveness--
Somewhere on its ride, she was hurt and was bruised.
And how I sympathize, as though I was her.
I have come to see her in me.

La la la, dopey, dopey, not.
Everyone
Sometimes feel lonely.
Yet it seems that's all my life...

The elegant black...
The mystery black...
The irresistible black...
The black of my memories...

Say good night now
To my sweet dreamy black...

Sunny day will come again.
And there will be a time
When I no longer attracted by black.

(c) September 3, 2006
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~The Stronger My Opponents, The Stronger I Am.

© Copyright 2006 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2006-09-05 09:00 AM


This is sweet and dreamy Eliza and black is a mysterious color. i am sure you re elegant in it. Love, Joyce
Juju
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2 posted 2006-09-19 10:06 PM


I love this peace alot.

-Juju

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Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2006-10-08 02:05 PM


SweetEliza~

'Want to taste,
Take a slip
Of seemingly dark coffee
That seemed so irresistible'


The sky wears the ebon colors of the night
that of which, you so boldly write
I think that, very much like you,
I sometimes like to wear black too~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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