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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2006-09-02 01:46 AM


Solitude Oh I Know So Well

Solitude, Oh, I know so well,
Since the age of ten.
Solitude, Oh, my last resort--
Doggie, would you leave me, too.
Oh, Mr. Solitude, did give me some joy--
You have given me a skill of self-lifting--
And I, I don't know... to cry or to smile.
Oh, Mr. Solitude has trained me to be strong.
Oh, dear Mr. Solitude, you have given me motive to seek some more--
Improvement and stronger confidence that I never got enough.
Since age of ten, I have follow your footstep...
Solitude sometimes do bring me joy.
He give me the strength to go over obstacle.
Yet I can't more fathom loneliness.
Oh, Mr. Solitude, will you marry me?

(c) September 1, 2006
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~The Stronger My Opponents, The Stronger I Am.

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1 posted 2006-09-02 06:07 AM


Don't marry Mr. solitude....that would be sad.   lol

Hi, I have the same feeling as you. But I still appreciate a friend's presence.

Total solitude is too lonely...

There's much truth in your poetry. I agree with you.

Cheers


Juju
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2 posted 2006-09-20 03:12 PM


Hmm....

I like the poem. Don't marry solitude.

-Juju

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-09-22 10:34 AM


I do understand this so well

I often think Solitude is a perfect partner

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2006-09-29 02:07 AM


Sometimes we can be our own best company for a little while.  Thee is nothing wrong with that.  this is really a thoughtful poem. Love, Joyce
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