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Orange Moon

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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Orange moon waxed in sight
Of the hungry star lit sky
Too afraid to swallow
But brave enough to taste
Of light that ended blackness

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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1 posted 12-30-2008 10:38 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

Woah...There's allot of meaning there I'm not getting isn't there?

Great job!!!

My melancholy is purely my own

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short and simple. i loved it. your just great with words.
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Thanks Guys, it feels good to be back.

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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Good write! Looking forward to reading more of your poems.
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