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0 posted 2008-12-27 09:34 PM



The sky is raining tears tonight
The ones straight from my heart
I'm not gonna cry over you tonight
because its not the right way to start

I'm not gonna cry on how you left me
or how desperate I really seem.
I'm not gonna cry because I love you
or how it kills me not to scream.

I feel the urge to scream and shout
but my feelings go unheard.
Only written out in black ink
But never spoken a word.

Cause on that paper
dry and torn
crumpled up
tattered and worn.

Lies the words of a kid
casualty of love here lie.
So this is how it feels like
for a heart to truly die.

Clouded skies in his mind
dried up eyes from tears he cried
Burning and tired from long nights awake
Cold as ice and undecided

The ink has been spelt
The paper damp with broken pride
Cause here lies a boy tonight
who's dying on the inside.



  

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1 posted 2008-12-29 02:10 PM


I really hope it all gets better for you Zach, Great poem, too!!!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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2 posted 2008-12-29 02:28 PM


"I'm not gonna cry because I love you
or how it kills me not to scream."

whoa. I am so sorry you are hurting. Clearly, you deserve much better.

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3 posted 2008-12-31 08:17 PM


Thanks guys.. Means alot that you commented... and I am sorta getting better..... sorta..  


-Zach

So together but so broken inside

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