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In Deep

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0 posted 12-27-2008 04:00 AM       View Profile for tearsoflove13762   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tearsoflove13762

Im so deep that I cannot breathe!
You are in too but not with me.

Of all the times I told you,
I love you

I never told you,
I am IN love with you.

Now I want to say it,
and I know that it will not make a difference.

Though I still want you to know.
You were my first love.

I realized this just this week.

I do not know what your response will be,
or even if you will pick up the phone when I call.

Though I still want you to know.
You were my first love.

The feelings will last a lifetime,
and I may take them with me to my grave,
but I want you to know.
You were my first love.

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yeah I know emotional write and really not that good but it is 3 am and I cant sleep. Its how I feel and my brain is not wanting to make it any more colorful than this... perhaps a new on will branch off of this emotionaln piece in a few days...



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with you


1 posted 12-27-2008 10:24 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

if this is how you feel then don't knock it! It's from your heart, it's your emotions. NEVER apologize for how you feel!!

and yes, you will remember him, always

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thanks SEA!!!
 
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