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Falling rain
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crying Pictures, Images and Photos
Another morning has come
Another time to put on this face
This mask for everyone to see
I just wish for it to erase

What happen to the old me?
The one I use to know
But who am I now?
Oh how I miss myself so..

People say how good she looks
And how she seems content.
You don't know how much
of this I really resent

I see myself in the mirror
And wonder who's really staring back?
How much I act happy for others
And how much truth there lacks

Putting on this make up
While whipping away these tears
Try to fix myself
But it just continues to smears

I can see the broken-self
But this face is a stranger to my eyes
I'm just plain sick of this
Enough with all the lies!

I'm tired of being fake
But these tears are real.
I don't wanna be this...
I don't want to conceal.





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wow...just, wow. i love it, completly love it. you did wonderful on this one...i'm still sitting here in some shock, lol.
library!!!

.:~]Julianna[~:.

waiting for you to notice me, touch me, hear me, love me...ask me for something other than gum.

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Wow, really nice, the only thing would be that 'smears' doesn't sound right, you might want to take out the last s do thats its 'smear'

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

 
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