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Eyes On Me

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Clockwork_Orange
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0 posted 12-24-2008 07:27 PM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

ill lay you down on a linen sheet
and never look away from those eyes on me
its just too good
to feel you now

for three long weeks it was misery
without a word or clue
about what to do without you

so how can i
keep living this lie
with no concience of whats right or wrong
im writing down what i feel in this song

but its just too hard
to keep breathing when you say
the sound of my name

silence is the loudest noise
so drown it out with the sound of my voice
let the static fade and let world die
as the words of this song
ring out inside

let me lay you down on this linen sheet
i wont look away from those eyes on me
© Copyright 2008 Bryan Lucas - All Rights Reserved
Earl Robertson
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since 01-21-2008
Posts 753
BC, Canada


1 posted 12-26-2008 01:33 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

Wow CO
Again I'm amazed!!

My melancholy is purely my own

HopelessPoet
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since 12-18-2008
Posts 13
Texas, U.S.A


2 posted 12-26-2008 09:36 PM       View Profile for HopelessPoet   Email HopelessPoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HopelessPoet

Very nice poem, great job.
 
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