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Falling rain
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It started out
Only as friends
But how was I to know
that it was all pretend?

A few weeks later
We were tight as can be
But that was all a charade
Just too blind to see

I have to admit
You turned me on
You were always there
But I fell for that stupid love song.

Wasted emotions
And too many tears
But now I'm moving on
There's no reason to fear

I know I can move on
And I'm better without
No reason to cry
Or even to shout

I can breathe again
And smile ever-now and then
I'm not wasting time on you
I'm not gonna do that again

I can see the light
And see the sense in this rhyme.
I know I'll be okay
It'll all get better in time.


"The picture at the top is an actually picture of me." hehe





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1 posted 12-23-2008 10:20 AM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

nicely written there zach. great poem by a great person
haha, nice picature, lol...
library.

.:~]Julianna[~:.

waiting for you to notice me, touch me, hear me, love me...ask me for something other than gum.

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2 posted 12-23-2008 08:13 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

Hey kid, Nice message. I needed that today, you have no idea how much.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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3 posted 12-23-2008 08:25 PM       View Profile for KandyGrl511   Email KandyGrl511   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for KandyGrl511

not ever thing can be healed with time
i liked it though.
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Nice poem, and nice picture, too

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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Zach that was wonderful. I really enjoyed that poem!

(library)

My melancholy is purely my own

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amazing poem Zach!!!!
<3
Krysti
 
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