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Now heres a funny story,
when God and Satan played a game
they both had different methods
but their intentions were the same

they introduced me to my world
a man with army skin
he told me all the places
and the fights they put him in

he was on a discharge
from an effed up mental state
I promised i'd take care of him
I took a bite of Satans bait

soon we talked of marriage
the house we'd build brand new
he was going to start a business
all my dreams were coming true =D

Then God sped up the time clock
ahd Satan made him go
he said he would come back for me
when I dont quite know

so this is what happens
when God and Satan compete
another bruised and beaten heart
lie lifeless in defeat
© Copyright 2008 Krysti - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-23-2008 09:20 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

OMFGSH KRYSTI!!! AHH! this is like! AMAZING!!! I was like.... ... Well it looked something like that.... lol. Anywho.. Great poem!! (Of course its going in my library.. duhh.. lol )

-Zach

So together but so broken inside

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Wow this is amazing and so sad at the same time. I love it

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

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Lovely Krysti, I miss you!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful poem, remember, there is a reason for everything. Keep holding on, endure, and the end will come out alright. I promise.

-Love
    Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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4 posted 12-24-2008 01:02 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

WOW Hunnie! That was beautiful!
I hope you're OK. Hang in there!

(Library)

My melancholy is purely my own

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*Hug*
 
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