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I was a fool

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HopelessPoet
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I was such a fool to think that our love would never fade. To think that you will always be with me. How could you walk away? This was our story. This was our fate, our destiny.

I guess I was a fool to think that you loved me. To think that you cared for me. To think that you will always be there for me. You are no lover. You are a curse.

A demon straight from the fiery depths of hell. You are not the angel I was fooled into seeing. You took me in with your lies. Promises that you would always be mine. I was a fool to think that you wanted me.

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1 posted 12-22-2008 10:25 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Welcome!

ahhha love, or something along those lines...don't ever be worried or afraid to be the "fool" in love. It's the ones that are too afraid to love, that are the fools

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Great job dude! I've been in that situation plenty of times. So don't feel too bad, your not the only one.

-Zach

So together but so broken inside

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Welcome to Passions. great first post
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4 posted 12-23-2008 08:11 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

I haven't been around for a while and this was the first poem I read since I've come back. It was nice to start with this HP, Love your sn by the way. It's super cute. Hope to see more.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

 
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