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What does this life give you?

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freeand2sexy
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What does this earthly life give you
You struggle and you squirm
Thought fulfillment would come your way
Tell me when you will learn

When you realize that you have nothing
This life didn't give, but took away
And now they left you here, just falling
All it ever gave, was fear and pain

What does this sin really leave you
The satisfaction never does last
You once hoped to find the real truth
Knowing it's better than what you had

I wonder when you will truly see
To see beyond the world's beliefs
Gaining a love and life eternally
A faith is what true love completes

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

© Copyright 2008 Christine Juarez - All Rights Reserved
Marc-Andre
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1 posted 12-20-2008 11:11 PM       View Profile for Marc-Andre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marc-Andre

A very nice read, and quite an improvement too I look forward to reading your next one. Wishing you the best of winter Holidays, Mark
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