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What did they take from me?

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What did they take from me
Stole my sight
And now I can't see
There's darkness, but no light

How can I find out who I am
When I'm left blind
Give me some clue to understand
Give me a solution to find

Is there any of me left
How could I lose myself
Maybe its for the best
To be someone else

Who can figure me out
Cuz I don't think I can
Tell me what this life is about
Will you guide me, take my hand

Whoever thought I'd be lost
Unable to find my way
What will this cost
For me to go back to okay

What did they take from me
Stole who I am
And now I'm not free
Chained down, again


With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.
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1 posted 12-17-2008 10:07 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

you always have choices. they are yours to make.
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2 posted 12-17-2008 10:12 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Yeah i know but some of my previous choices where mistakes that led me away from who i really was.

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so change it. you did before, it was in steps, right? A gradual change? So change back. It's one choice, then another
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Actually i did change it and i feel better about it, but i lost a few good friends in my life. sadly my stupid action left a scar.

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it's ok. That happens. You know you moved on and aren't that way any more. Give it time, you don't have to keep telling them or you know, trying to get them back. Show them, that you changed and see what happens. Who knows? I'd say maybe you've just out grown them
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yeah, i think i'm jus going to move on with my life, changing my first choice that i made is why me and few of my friends are not close anymore, i wish i hadn't made that choice in the first place, but i cant change the past, all i can do is move on.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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