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I'm Your Mistake

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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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your mistake Pictures, Images and Photos

This life I'm living,
is not right for me.
It seems I'm someone
fighting to do my own
thing...
but all the while
I'm trapped inside this
body of anger and hurt.
Mornings spent getting
yelled at for meaningless
things I've subcontiously
commited.
It's not my fault I'm
like this,
if I had my choice I'd
run away to somewhere I'm
loved to the fullest,
where I'm appreciated.
You may not like what I've
done but as a newsflash...
I don't either.
Its just stupid mistakes
that all of you have taken to
seriously.
I'm a nobody.
I'm regreted.
I'm worthless.
I'm your mistake...

.:~]Julianna[~:.

waiting for you to notice me, touch me, hear me, love me...ask me for something other than gum.

© Copyright 2008 Julianna - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-17-2008 05:26 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

awwww dang....

I hope that isn't true
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its not true, its just how i feel. and it sucks...

.:~]Julianna[~:.

waiting for you to notice me, touch me, hear me, love me...ask me for something other than gum.

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3 posted 12-17-2008 05:37 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I think we all end up feeling that way.
It's kinda like growing pains...

hang in there, I was the "black sheep" of my family for a long time, sometimes I still feel like I am lol... it does get better
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4 posted 12-17-2008 05:39 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

lol, thats good. it makes me have something to look forward to

.:~]Julianna[~:.

waiting for you to notice me, touch me, hear me, love me...ask me for something other than gum.

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5 posted 12-17-2008 05:41 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Awww! Julianna great poem. I'm sorry your feeling this way. Hope things get better.  

-Zach

So together but so broken inside

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thanks zach. your making me feel better, so you should be happy too, lol. ttyl!!!

.:~]Julianna[~:.

waiting for you to notice me, touch me, hear me, love me...ask me for something other than gum.

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really it does get better

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yay!!! that makes me happier, lol...

.:~]Julianna[~:.

waiting for you to notice me, touch me, hear me, love me...ask me for something other than gum.

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Good poem. SEA is right, it gets better!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.
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