How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Teen Poetry #8 Archive
 The Bloody Ride
 1
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

The Bloody Ride

    Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
thegreatsicknasty
Junior Member
since 08-31-2008
Posts 11


0 posted 12-16-2008 04:24 PM       View Profile for thegreatsicknasty   Email thegreatsicknasty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thegreatsicknasty

Winter is a fringe on our bodies.
My confidence and the sky meet.
I expect very little from you.
The dirty clothes on your floor, the bar of soap and the roof.
I'll watch you and protect you but you forget I'm there.
Taking me for granted.
Invisible when I am right in your face.
If Persistence leads to bliss then I have given up.
Do I have your attention or are you blind?
I am lead like a rabid guide dog.
And I am left behind like a fool.
I don't want to be a pair of school children.
And I only dream of me and you.
I cut myself until I bleed.
Until I bleed ink that is.
And I'll bleed all over you.
© Copyright 2008 thegreatsicknasty - All Rights Reserved
SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 01-18-2000
Posts 24152
with you


1 posted 12-16-2008 04:41 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

this is a double post, it's in open and in here. I'm going to close this one, and then you can email me and let me know if you want this one removed or the one in open
 
    Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Teen Poetry #8 >> The Bloody Ride Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors