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Falling rain
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broekn heart Pictures, Images and Photos

Many times I've cried
Felt the stinging of my red eyes
So many times felt broken up inside
And had to hide myself in lies

I know all too well how this goes
This is just another repeat in my life
It only took two words to kill me
"Its over" serves it right in this strife.

Don't worry about me
My heart will mend
And these eyes will learn not to cry
I'll try to see the light around the bend

Fallen so many times
My eyes grow colder
I can see that you never cared
But I've learn this lesson as my time grows older.

You'll never see how I feel
Can't understand what's on my mind.
Why I feel like shouting at you
And why It hurts to be in this bind

Don't try to fix the broken
Because the broken is through with you
You should of saw this coming
If only you knew..

[This message has been edited by Falling rain (12-15-2008 11:05 PM).]

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Wow... really strong poem...keep up the great work!!!!!!! I loved it!

Baby~Girl

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Neat picture!

I had a question. Where did you come up with a title for your poem? Was it because of the picture or something you had referenced? The only thing that I saw which could point toward blue eyes was, "My eyes grow colder." Just wondering.
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3 posted 12-15-2008 07:16 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Well the title I got was from a song. Behind These Hazel Eyes by Kelly Clarkson. I used "blue eyes" instead because I have blue eyes myself. And the picture played a part of it. And you got it right. "cold eyes" are referring to my eyes after the break up and how I had to make it through. Thanks for reading my poem though.

-Zach  

So together but so broken inside

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Nice!!!

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aww, zach i'm still really sorry. i hope you get through this and come out even stronger when through.
if you ever need a shoulder to cry on, i'll always be that 10 hour drive away here with emmalee and tori waiting for you to come.
and since that's really unrealistic (lol), i'm always online for you to talk to. hope everything goes better than you thought it would!!!
love ya bunches <3

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

 
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