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Cold nights spent together
Closer then we should be
Laying on the couch
But deep inside i know this should be

Crackling wood
as the fire eats it alive.
I look into your eyes
your love, in my heart will always thrive.

I feel like nothing can hold me down.
No earthly bound can't keep me in place
In your eyes my heart flutters
I see heaven when I look at your face.

Comfort sweep's through my senses
When you hold me against your chest
I found happiness when I hear your voice
I just can't express

What's going through my mind
I don't know what you did to me
With your love so boundful
And lips bright as ruby

I get lost in your eyes
I get weak in the knee's when you say "hi"
No power on earth can tell me its not true
That my love for you is just a lie.

You have a powerful bound
A ghostly bound within me
Your control over my heart
Tells me that this should be

Some superhuman power.
Your smiles makes my heart skip a beat
You hold me when I feel broken
And you tell me you not gonna let that repeat.

You love my unconditionally
Your my superhero to be there
Fly me off into the sunset
To be there to listen and care.

I love you
Doesn't sum up what I feel
This is so much more
Its simply surreal
    



  "This poem is dedicated to a special person in my life, Lurch..."
© Copyright 2008 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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aww...this is so sweet. i absolutly love every part of it. great job!!!

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

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2 posted 12-19-2008 12:09 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Oh.My.Goodness.      

holy crap. ..wow.

in other words im pretty much speechless.
This is a beautiful poem,
and the last stanza.....wow.
haha, anyway, great job.

{~~*~~}

Miss.Emmalee

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