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One Hundred Feet

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Octave
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since 07-29-2008
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Highlands, Scotland.


0 posted 12-12-2008 01:09 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Octave

One Hunderd Feet

Standing on this roadside
Standing in this crowd
One day up and
One hundred down

Sick of this pattern
That i know too well
Can't take it any more
I'm just an empty shell

Too tired to cry
Too tired to even care
Surrounded by strangers
Who just stop and stare

Loath my self-hatred
Detest my petty tears
Cracks in the mirror
Self-directed jeers

Hate this person i've become
A person i simply want to kill
I would not hesitate
If i just had the will

These tears are meaningless
That trickle down my face
Standing on this roadsde
Covered in disgrace

When will my day come
For happiness or sleep
I don't care which one
As long as i don't weep

Standing in this crisis
Standing in this crowd
One day up and
One hundered down.
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Clockwork_Orange
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since 03-23-2007
Posts 623
Space Camp, IN


1 posted 12-16-2008 06:56 PM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

Loath my self-hatred
Detest my petty tears
Cracks in the mirror
Self-directed jeers

Hate this person i've become
A person i simply want to kill
I would not hesitate
If i just had the will

wow. this was great.
KandyGrl511
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since 11-30-2008
Posts 52
Michigan


2 posted 12-23-2008 08:33 PM       View Profile for KandyGrl511   Email KandyGrl511   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for KandyGrl511

wow that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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