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To My Love

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frail
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0 posted 12-11-2008 03:02 AM       View Profile for frail   Email frail   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for frail

Unexplainable things,
Unspoken feelings.
Giving me new reason to Live,
And another hope to believe.

If I could just kiss those lips,
Touch you with my fingertips.
And if I could of hold you forever,
I promise to be your eternal lover.

When I thought it was Love's violent death,
You thickened the air so I could breath.
You drag the past without bringing tears,
Instead assurance for all my fears.

I Love you with certainty,
I hope you stay for eternity.
Even if I don't know where this would Lead,
'cause I am most willing to bleed. ..

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KandyGrl511
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1 posted 12-23-2008 08:48 PM       View Profile for KandyGrl511   Email KandyGrl511   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for KandyGrl511

wow that is really meaningful but i loved it~!?!~
VampireWifey
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2 posted 01-02-2009 09:43 PM       View Profile for VampireWifey   Email VampireWifey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VampireWifey

i loved this poem it was really good i like the part when you wrote loves a violent death.
VampireWifey
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3 posted 01-02-2009 09:44 PM       View Profile for VampireWifey   Email VampireWifey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VampireWifey

ooops i meant loves violent death sry lol
Clockwork_Orange
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4 posted 01-03-2009 07:41 PM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

nice write. it was really good.
beautyincalvary
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5 posted 01-08-2009 12:50 AM       View Profile for beautyincalvary   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for beautyincalvary

I like the dark imagery, especially the blood in your last line.
Marc-Andre
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6 posted 01-08-2009 03:19 AM       View Profile for Marc-Andre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marc-Andre

Even if I don't know where this would Lead,
'cause I am most willing to bleed. ..


I like the ending couplet. Mark
Assassin_of_Verse
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7 posted 01-09-2009 01:29 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

Very nice writing. You twisted the words so that they sound loving on the surface, yet they retain a chilling edge.
Library.

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frail
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8 posted 01-13-2009 08:15 PM       View Profile for frail   Email frail   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for frail

Hehehehe! Guys! Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. This was actually for a very important person in my life, I fell in love with that dude but he has never seen this. I'm too shy, he'll know it's for him.

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