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Teen Poetry #8

My Brothers Death

Rand0m_guy54321
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since 2008-12-08

Posts 7
U.S.

0 posted 2008-12-08 10:40 PM

My Brothers Death

By Landon Bauer

Your death has caused sadness to us all
So many letters unwritten
Like an unfinished book
So many things unsaid
Like a game never finished
A life lost so quick
I wish I had more time
I would give anything to have you back
I would give the whole world if I could
I miss the few
Good times I enjoyed
With you

In dedication to Joshua Bauer
the greatest brother there ever was

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-12-09 12:36 PM

This is a very sad poem and I know what its like to lose someone you love very much.
Krysti

KandyGrl511
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since 2008-11-30

Posts 52
Michigan

2 posted 2008-12-25 10:49 PM

i know what you are going through.i know people say that. it does not help because they cant bring that loved one back. i lost my daddy and my baby nephew on november 2nd in a car accident.then i lost my dads mother on december 3rd.i loved your poem!!!!

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