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My Brothers Death

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Rand0m_guy54321
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My Brothers Death

By Landon Bauer

Your death has caused sadness to us all
So many letters unwritten
Like an unfinished book
So many things unsaid
Like a game never finished
A life lost so quick
I wish I had more time
I would give anything to have you back
I would give the whole world if I could
I miss the few
Good times I enjoyed
With you

In dedication to Joshua Bauer
the greatest brother there ever was
© Copyright 2008 Landon Bauer - All Rights Reserved
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This is a very sad poem and I know what its like to lose someone you love very much.
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i know what you are going through.i know people say that. it does not help because they cant bring that loved one back. i lost my daddy and my baby nephew on november 2nd in a car accident.then i lost my dads mother on december 3rd.i loved your poem!!!!
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