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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2008-12-08 07:57 PM



I wrote this cuz I'm always, somehow, getting into embarrassing situations, so tell me what you think of it.


Laughter in the air
My cheeks turn red
I shrug down in my chair
The moment of dread

No where to go
Can't hide from the faces
No where to run
Cuz there's no other places

One little mistake
Is all that they need
Bravory I can't fake
Nor can I retreat

Millions of eyes
Staring at me
I breathe a lil sigh
As I hold on to sanity

I try to get past
This moment of dread
I know it won't last
But it might happen again

Cackles and stares
All around me
I shrug down in my chair
Til they let me be


I love pancakes!!!

© Copyright 2008 Christine Juarez - All Rights Reserved
wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US
1 posted 2008-12-08 09:10 PM


i really like it and i understand. great poem.
hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
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2 posted 2008-12-09 12:28 PM


Wow I liked this it seemed.. like I've been here wayy to many times as well:P
Krysti

TrueDesire12
Junior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 11
England
3 posted 2008-12-09 03:41 PM


Cool, i like this poem! It happens to everyone!

TrueDesire
xx

xsaamaanthaax
Junior Member
since 2008-11-28
Posts 21
USA, Arizona.
4 posted 2008-12-10 10:57 PM


Wow, I know this is crazy, but you should sumbit that poem to chicken noodle soup for the teenage soul. They have a section on that type of thing. Great poem..Liked it alot.
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
5 posted 2008-12-10 11:42 PM


Thanks guys, yup it happens to everyone. Embarrassment is jus one more thing we have to go through in life.

I love pancakes!!!

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