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TrueDesire12
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since 2008-12-07
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England

0 posted 2008-12-08 10:38 AM


You ripped out my heart,
You stood there,
Watching,
Watchibg me full apart.
Blood pouring from my eyes,
My vison was blurry,
I was blind.
Couldn't see what you were doing,
Didn't know you had a plan,
Acting as though you loved me,
That i was the only girl you ever wanted.
Once again it was a lie,
You took me in and left me to die.
You knew what you was doing,
But you just couldn't stop.
You lorred me in like a fish on a hook.
I cry a tear every night,
For what you did to me,
But u will never cry a tear for you,
Because you have no dignity!

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1 posted 2008-12-08 11:48 AM


welcome to Pip!

once a liar, always a liar. this person is not worth your tears.

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wolf girl
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2 posted 2008-12-08 06:08 PM


very very true. i really liked this. i can relate.
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3 posted 2008-12-09 12:18 PM


thats what they do... He is definately not worth the time and effort. great first post welcome to Passions
Krysti

TrueDesire12
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since 2008-12-07
Posts 11
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4 posted 2008-12-09 03:29 PM


Y thank you!

xx

KandyGrl511
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Michigan
5 posted 2008-12-26 11:34 PM


wow
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