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wolf girl
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0 posted 12-08-2008 12:17 AM       View Profile for wolf girl   Email wolf girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wolf girl

i loved you with all my heart
from the very start

the pain it lasts forever
somehow its not getting better

you said they were all better than me
can that really be?

you knew how to break my heart
you perfected it like an art

somehow the words i miss you dont really cut it
but now ive gone and dont it

your getting ready to walk away
theres nothing i can say

i knew you desereved someone better
thats why i let you go

your sadness crushes my heart
your tears shatter my soul

youll never never know how much this hurts
but its better this way for im nothing more than dirt
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TrueDesire12
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1 posted 12-08-2008 10:42 AM       View Profile for TrueDesire12   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrueDesire12

hey you shuldnt say that about yourself. your the one who desvers somebetter!

still a lovely poem!

TrueDesire
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2 posted 12-09-2008 12:15 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Jenna, this was such an emotional poem I think everyone has been threw this at least one time...Keep writing
Krysti
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3 posted 12-25-2008 11:08 PM       View Profile for KandyGrl511   Email KandyGrl511   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for KandyGrl511

i may not know you but you should not let a guy think that youre no good!i loved your poem~!?!~
 
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