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tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2008-12-06 03:52 AM


I am not that girl who sits and waits,
and I am not one to take a guy's bait.

So why did I find myself waiting for two hours,
and letting you take all of my powers?

I am not that girl who sleeps with just any guy,
and I am not one to cry.

So why did I sleep with you,
and cry all night until the skies were blue?



aol sn- sweetcountry007

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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
1 posted 2008-12-06 01:14 PM


Aw!!! This is sad- I know what its like to not be that girl and then act in a way you normally wouldn't.. I have a poem that I wrote earlier this week about a similar subject. I might post it.. if you don't mind or anything..


tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
2 posted 2008-12-06 02:19 PM


of course not I would love to read it!
TrueDesire12
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since 2008-12-07
Posts 11
England
3 posted 2008-12-07 02:12 PM


I so understand your poem, i have been through it all before. Its like you tell your self you wouldnt but then you do.

TrueDesire
xx

hunnie_girl
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4 posted 2008-12-08 01:25 AM


you're back
love this a lot!!
Krysti

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