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For my future (redone)

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freeand2sexy
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I think its still kinda crappy, but i gave it some more thought and redid it and added some more stuff, so i hope it came out okay. Just be truthful and tell me that it's crappy, if it really is.

Who are you
What is it that you see
I see the future
Where this isn't meant to be

I take steps back
Slowly breath
But for my future
That's what I'm in need

Why can't I regret this
A false nature of me
Pertend you don't exist
So I can live in reality

Who are you
To stop me where I am
Tell me this is as far as I go
When you don't understand

It's not about you
Tho you make it to be about us
It's about my future
And in it, I don't want this lust

Why can't you let go
Forget this simple love
I rather be alone
Cuz I've had enough

My future is all I see
I want the happy not the sad
Let me live in reality
For my future

Don't let me regret the past

I love pancakes!!!

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WONDERFUL!!! awesome job

really truly this is excellent!
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AWESOMELY AMAZING~!?!~
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3 posted 12-26-2008 12:10 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

WHOA! this was like the situation I'm in right now in my life. This was just really mind blowing. lol.

-Zach

So together but so broken inside

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