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freeand2sexy
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0 posted 2008-12-05 08:33 PM



I think its still kinda crappy, but i gave it some more thought and redid it and added some more stuff, so i hope it came out okay. Just be truthful and tell me that it's crappy, if it really is.

Who are you
What is it that you see
I see the future
Where this isn't meant to be

I take steps back
Slowly breath
But for my future
That's what I'm in need

Why can't I regret this
A false nature of me
Pertend you don't exist
So I can live in reality

Who are you
To stop me where I am
Tell me this is as far as I go
When you don't understand

It's not about you
Tho you make it to be about us
It's about my future
And in it, I don't want this lust

Why can't you let go
Forget this simple love
I rather be alone
Cuz I've had enough

My future is all I see
I want the happy not the sad
Let me live in reality
For my future

Don't let me regret the past

I love pancakes!!!

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1 posted 2008-12-05 10:27 PM


WONDERFUL!!! awesome job

really truly this is excellent!

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2 posted 2008-12-25 11:14 PM


AWESOMELY AMAZING~!?!~
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3 posted 2008-12-26 12:10 PM


WHOA! this was like the situation I'm in right now in my life. This was just really mind blowing. lol.

-Zach

So together but so broken inside

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