navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #8 » For my future
Teen Poetry #8
Post A Reply Post New Topic For my future Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2008-12-02 07:55 PM



Short and crappy, but here it goes


Who are you?
What is it that you see?
I see the future,
Where it isn't meant to be.

Yeah, I take steps back.
I breath in the air,
But for my future,
Is all that I care.

I love pancakes!!!

© Copyright 2008 Christine Juarez - All Rights Reserved
SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
1 posted 2008-12-04 11:08 AM


I bet you could do a lot more with this. It's just kinda raw...but the thoughts are good. Work with this, expand your thoughts....then repost it
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
2 posted 2008-12-04 07:06 PM


I'll try to expand my thoughts, and if i come up with something good than i'll repost it.

I love pancakes!!!

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #8 » For my future

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary