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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 12-02-2008 12:05 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for hunnie_girl

Be prepared its a long poem story.... might not really make sense to you but we'll see?


You were just another one night stand
except I think I fell for you
'cos I cant do anything right these days
unless you're telling me to.

It seemed we had more going
than just a casual roll in the hay
did you feel it too?
Or was I just another lay?

you held my hand in public
like you were more than just a friend
you let me stay in your arms
even after the nights came to an end

I know it was nothing more
than just a little fun
but I thought it would last forever
I didnt think you'd run

I should've known you'd get cold feet
when my ex found out about us
you said we'd still be together
if he didnt put up such a fuss

everytime I see you
you never even look my way
just another punch
to ruin my day

we went from good friends
to nothing at all
i've taken the hit
that caused me to fall

you were just another one night stand
another man who hasn't done right
now alone i'm in the dark
i'm the loser of the fight
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1 posted 12-02-2008 09:07 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

hey this is a great example of why you shouldn't sleep around. Why should he talk to you again?! You slept with him. Like it or not you can't just sleep with someone and expect to NOT get hurt. There is more to sex than just physical gratification. I think you did a great job showing this!

I hope young readers to young adults will read this and come away with an understanding that you play, most times, your heart pays. Sad, but true.
freeand2sexy
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2 posted 12-02-2008 07:27 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I agree with SEA but it was a very good poem. I can honestly say that it has helped open my eyes a lil more.

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Ri
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3 posted 12-03-2008 05:32 AM       View Profile for Ri   Email Ri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ri

I believe that sex should be the ultimate symbol of love and doing so is like a vow that you will stay with the person forever, so avoiding doing this unless it's the one is avoiding false promises and avoiding heartache

A great poem nonetheless
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4 posted 12-03-2008 08:19 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Omgsh.. I read the title first and was like "Oh I bet this is gonna be good.. hehe" I agree with all ya. Sex should be a show for a  devoted affection towards one person. Amazing poem as always hun!

-Zach  

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

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5 posted 01-12-2009 04:10 AM       View Profile for Abbeon   Email Abbeon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Abbeon

Hunnie, Come on, You and i know beter then that. But, i know sleeping around does get people into trouble. Sex with out love is just that Sex a good feeling a good time. But when you love some one, and you know they love you, it feels like so much more. It feels like love inside and out. Hunnie, Im always here for you.

With love Abbeon
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6 posted 01-12-2009 09:52 PM       View Profile for wwzwlmd8   Email wwzwlmd8   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wwzwlmd8

this is one of your greats
and i've been there to

~Indya

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7 posted 06-11-2009 12:46 PM       View Profile for LittleWillow   Email LittleWillow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LittleWillow

This is great!

Explains exactly something i did right down to a tea!

Couldnt believe it!

Cant wait to read more!
xx
 
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