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Teen Poetry #8

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Octave
Member

since 2008-07-29

Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

0 posted 2008-11-29 04:57 PM

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In this mixed up
Troubled old world
I just dont understand
Which path to take

Every shard of my
Every broken thought
Seems to land me
In confusion

Sometimes i sit alone
And wonder about these
Things that sit upon my mind
And follow me around

I can't escape my past
My history, my victory
I can't shake off this
Feeling of discomfort

Mirrors tell lies
Or maybe even truths
How can i decide
Which is worse

My map has a hole
Where my destination
Should be.
What can i do?

Life is one long winding
Road of disappointment
And expectations.
I need to erase

In this mixed up
Troubled old world
Sometimes i think
Whats the point?

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-11-29 05:17 PM

I can really relate to this. Great work.

I love pancakes!!!

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