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Teen Poetry #8

never follow through

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2008-11-28 02:06 PM

I know what I want
but I never follow through
Time after time all I find,
Is another guy like you

you're not what I need
I know you're bad for me
but you're madly in love
and everyone can see

ot's not that I dont want to
love you with everything I've got
but I just can't fall in love
with everything you're not

I know what I want
I know it's not you
but time after time
I never follow through...

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-11-28 11:07 PM

Nice poem, i can relate.

I love pancakes!!!

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

2 posted 2008-11-29 01:21 AM

Nice! I like it

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2008-12-12 05:36 PM

Hi Hunnie,

I really liked this poem. I loved how you are consistant in your theme. I like how you followed through on your message; it was a good job.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-12-12 10:02 PM

Wonderful. I love the simple power in this one.

My melancholy is purely my own

Baby_Girl
Junior Member

since 2008-05-10

Posts 21
OH, United States

5 posted 2008-12-15 05:25 PM

Wow Hunnie....Really liked the poem....I love you poetry...Its totally amazing!

Baby~Girl

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

6 posted 2009-01-12 04:17 AM

I feel in love with every thing I thought he was, i wanted him to be. And when it fell apart, The person there for me was the person i didn't see, and gradually i grew to love them, with out knowing it. Hunnie, i know you can find the person you want. You deserve more then who you got.

With love Rebecca-Jade

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