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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 11-28-2008 02:06 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for hunnie_girl


I know what I want
but I never follow through
Time after time all I find,
Is another guy like you

you're not what I need
I know you're bad for me
but you're madly in love
and everyone can see

ot's not that I dont want to
love you with everything I've got
but I just can't fall in love
with everything you're not

I know what I want
I know it's not you
but time after time
I never follow through...
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freeand2sexy
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1 posted 11-28-2008 11:07 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Nice poem, i can relate.

I love pancakes!!!

rhia_5779
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2 posted 11-29-2008 01:21 AM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

Nice! I like it
stargal
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3 posted 12-12-2008 05:36 PM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

Hi Hunnie,

I really liked this poem. I loved how you are consistant in your theme. I like how you followed through on your message; it was a good job.

Earl Robertson
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4 posted 12-12-2008 10:02 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

Wonderful. I love the simple power in this one.

My melancholy is purely my own

Baby_Girl
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5 posted 12-15-2008 05:25 PM       View Profile for Baby_Girl   Email Baby_Girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Baby_Girl

Wow Hunnie....Really liked the poem....I love you poetry...Its totally amazing!

Baby~Girl

Abbeon
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6 posted 01-12-2009 04:17 AM       View Profile for Abbeon   Email Abbeon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Abbeon

I feel in love with every thing I thought he was, i wanted him to be. And when it fell apart, The person there for me was the person i didn't see, and gradually i grew to love them, with out knowing it. Hunnie, i know you can find the person you want. You deserve more then who you got.

With love Rebecca-Jade

 
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