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GothicCherry
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0 posted 2008-11-26 05:34 PM


Finally you see the difference of life and death
Releasing the worldly beliefs you held on to
Discontent with breathing only a bodily breath
You at last seize the hope so long pursued

Preparing your heart, fixing the damage
Your spiritual life starts fresh and anew
More intense than you had ever fully imaged
Now the temptations of sin are through

Facing the ultimate truth you were hidden from
Recalling that voice buried inside eternally
And now your strings have become undone
The voice of truth set you free, almost instantly

Tears slide down your now angelic features
Joyous drops to express your heart's cleansing
Glad for the lessons learned from the preachers
Crying as your life begins mending

Finally you let go of what held you back
Forgiven from every sin you have made
This time you're on the right track
Praising the Lord for His loving aid

By: Michaela J. Mchone & Christine Juarez


© Copyright 2008 Michaela J. McHone - All Rights Reserved
freeand2sexy
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1 posted 2008-11-26 06:04 PM


I think we did a good job, Michaela, and it was fun, too. lol

I love pancakes!!!

GothicCherry
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2 posted 2008-11-26 06:11 PM


I believe we did. Lol.
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