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A Dozen Roses
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A Dozen Roses |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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i left you a dozen roses outside your window late last night hoping you would see them when you open your eyes its one more way to tell you that your the reason i still breath that you are my whole world and you mean everything to me and its your smile that saves me when i think i cant go on when the world gets dark around me and all my hopes are gone your the other half of me i cant live without the person who gives me strength when im drowning in my doubt so i left you a dozen roses outside your window late last night hoping you would see them when you open your eyes |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Great poem. Its so sweet. Keep writing! I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Oh wow. Is this a song Bryan, cause it sure sounds like one. Exelent JOB!!! My melancholy is purely my own |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
yeah its a song. i hope u all like it  |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Wow, its an amazing song!!! "Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bryan, this is a beautiful sentiment ( just remember though, that you ARE "whole" and that the saying about someone being your other half or making you whole, should be that they enhance your life and don't make it whole but add to it. From one who knows  M |
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